The rhythm of this piece pulled me in immediately, but the line “I was always the one devising what is rising” lingered the longest. It feels like the moment the struggle stops being something happening to you and becomes something you're finally willing to face. Saying goodbye there doesn't feel like an ending—it feels like the beginning of meeting yourself honestly.
Your written voice is absolutely memorable and stunning. This piece is like a poem from you to you and it shows how honest it is. I love the authenticity, and how I know very little poets that write this way. Your voiceover is also such a pleasure to listen to, it’s always lyrical and sounds like music to my ears. Beautiful work d!
The rhythm of this piece pulled me in immediately, but the line “I was always the one devising what is rising” lingered the longest. It feels like the moment the struggle stops being something happening to you and becomes something you're finally willing to face. Saying goodbye there doesn't feel like an ending—it feels like the beginning of meeting yourself honestly.
Yes! Thank You, Antonio! Appreciate you reading! 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥
He said goodbye
to the version of himself
that apologized
for taking up space.
That is not a loss.
That is the whole point.
— AËLA
❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥🖤🖤🖤🖤
<3 <3 <3 Appreciate you! <3 <3 <3
Reading your poems and hearing you read them is always such a pleasure. Thank you ❤️🌹
Ahhh, I appreciate this comment so much! Thank you!! 😊 🫶🏼🖤🫶🏼
Your written voice is absolutely memorable and stunning. This piece is like a poem from you to you and it shows how honest it is. I love the authenticity, and how I know very little poets that write this way. Your voiceover is also such a pleasure to listen to, it’s always lyrical and sounds like music to my ears. Beautiful work d!
That you, my beautiful friend! I appreciate you listening and hearing the words, and reading it and seeing the reality of it. Appreciate you!! 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥
Bluffing? What’s up with three dots? Come on now D. x
Also, I use the three dots for separating…guess I could use lines in lieu of dots…never thought that thought when I plot…hmmm…could be useful.
I meant “dotted lines that weigh and drive me deeper and deeper”, three dots as a metaphor for leaving. Nothing to do with the format D. x
I've written so much today, my mind is so out of it. LOL...let me just go ahead and throw the "Thank You" out that I'm also not supposed to...Jesus D.
and Holy Spirit, no no, not the actual spirit D.
Lmao…I like you,
Same x
Not so good at poker…
egads I hope you ain't leaving us.
not yet
phew you are a good writier