my rendition
rendered this, rendered that
A note reply to Sincerely Seb, decided to make this a post. My first line was provided by him, thank you, my friend!
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Screaming within my thoughts
the plot thickens as my mind is caught
I’m not about to quicken my rhymes like bots
my words properly written, my lines I’ve sought
from the day I picked up a pen at ten
I’ve been writing rhymes again and again
repeating the cycle, tidal waves I’d send
competing with bible, psycho Dame’s the end
the one I meet in finality rendered mute
the one I seek in normality rendered cute
I’m not cute, I’m hideous with the word play
my mentality always to let the words slay
clay can be moulded to a specific design
like my words, rolled it, a terrific align
with a mind like mine, surrender is ne’er chosen
with these rhymes like mine, I’m rendered very potent
a poet in a moment ready to seize
I wrote it like I stole it ready to leave
so leave me be or I’ll end your cognition
rendered this, rendered that, this is my rendition.
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‘from the day I picked up a pen at ten
I’ve been writing rhymes again and again’
You write poetry like journal entries and I think that’s what I value about them most, some feel crafted some feel vomited some feel channelled some feel like prayer, some like your trying to order a mess, or make mess out of order, but every-time and every single one feels authentic and raw, i think thats what makes your poetry so incredible.
You're like Eminem over here!!