Loved the image of folding the cards only to have them dealt again. Such a beautiful metaphor for the ways love keeps inviting us back to the table, no matter how many times we’ve been hurt before 🖤
Genius bit of writing in there beauty, something metaphorical and very projectional - powerful and I started writing something around the word portal earlier that has turned into the word Fractal - so I like the resonance of the word ‘portal’ turning up here too. 👌✨felt the movement in this peice - it’s not stuck or stagnant - real moving energy and voice in it - which collectively is great 😊
and any recipient of this poem would like you not to "fold again".....this poem gave me a visceral response, like a gentle tug of the tide drawing the sand slightly from under feet encouraging another step towards the ocean
Loved the image of folding the cards only to have them dealt again. Such a beautiful metaphor for the ways love keeps inviting us back to the table, no matter how many times we’ve been hurt before 🖤
Thank you for reading! I’m glad that resonated with you. 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥. Appreciate you!
No problem! Much deserved 🖤
‘Side by side, hand in hand’. 🫶
Genius bit of writing in there beauty, something metaphorical and very projectional - powerful and I started writing something around the word portal earlier that has turned into the word Fractal - so I like the resonance of the word ‘portal’ turning up here too. 👌✨felt the movement in this peice - it’s not stuck or stagnant - real moving energy and voice in it - which collectively is great 😊
Thank you, Vianne! I’m glad it resonated! 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥
Damn 🔥
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Ugh, it’s just so beautiful. It turned me purple, snatching all of the oxygen from me from start to finish. Fantastic❤️🔥
Thank you!! 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥
Love the imagery here.
Well done Mr. Gambler 💜
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and any recipient of this poem would like you not to "fold again".....this poem gave me a visceral response, like a gentle tug of the tide drawing the sand slightly from under feet encouraging another step towards the ocean
Thank you for reading! I’m glad it resonated in that way! 🫶🏼🖤❤️🔥
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Your words hold a tender gamble of longing, devotion, and the courage to keep betting on connection. Thank you for sharing such a soulful unfolding.